Sunshower

A notebook

Filled with heart-filled truths

Pages of my heart

Held together with fine wire

Easily ripped

Waiting for a hero to return

Waiting to be carried

Into a field of tulips

Overrun with stars

A constellation on every petal

We fall into my dream

Awaiting the adventures hidden

Underneath every leaf

The petals stroke my face

I reach out to the moon

Just to meet your hand

Pulling me up

My eyes meeting yours

So deep

So familiar

A kiss among the tulips

My dreams are still on paper

Trimmed with silver wire.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Pages of my heart

Held together with fine wire

Easily ripped

Waiting for a hero to return


So deeply expressed and beautifully penned ~ a very nice piece of writing~Well DonE!!~Fran Marie

[Kara Emily Krantz]

that's a truly gorgeous piece. i really adore this. the heart-filled pages, and the wire, and the tulips.... fantastic images throughout, and you carried them til the end.

really well done my dear

[Sally Edwards]

Great poem, such romantic notions, beautifully told, I can just see the ittle notebook trimmed with the silver wire. I enjoyed reading this.

[Adventerous Amy]

Wow......................................................(speechless)

[A.r. Bazian]

very nice!
romantic!
the environment is rather unique and touching!

well written!

keep it up!

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Nice. I understand how important writing can be to a person and then how important the utensils needed to create that work can be.