You are

What happens when i fall in love.

 

You are my ten greatest aspirations

You are my nine heart-felt wishes

You are my eight love songs

You are my seven pieces of heaven

You are my six forces joined

You are my five golden rings

You are my four biggest hugs

You are my three secret thoughts

You are my two halves

You are my one and only.

Author's Note

I know it's a bit cheesy, but enjoy. :)

Reviews

[William Cuthbert]

You're right � it is kind of cheesy. But is that necessarily a bad thing? I think not. Nice poem. I enjoyed it.

[c. d. dylan]

interesting concept, but way too sweet. way, way too sweet. not my taste. it's well-written, though.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

I think it is delightfully sweet. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[kenzie]

I like it....

[Mary]

this was great. It has a deep message, and i like that. nice job. =)