I will!

The feeling you get when someone truly knows you, that laughter, the smiles and the times they're there hold you,

Over coming everything even when It scolds you,

The closeness, the bonds and heaven truly knows It-

No one really knows the depths of It till It's truly gone- but I feel It and I need It just to carry on,

If you're never coming back I have to live and walk on but the next face I see, I'll hold out with open arms, 

Because a smile we all need and a friend never truly leaves- If we just took the time to care more before we dropped to our knees,

All memories are good even though some are truly sad I'll just make new memories hoping this time will last,

No crying, no sadness, no alone times we have-

I put my heart and love forward to prevent the aftermath,

I miss you I do and I learned from my past to never let another keep you down In your path,

They'll be friendly faces all around or even some that's sad but no matter what I'm gonna lend a hand and be a friend that last..

Reviews

[TJ]

wow what a complex and beautiful piece. this is such a hopeful read! in it there is the sadness of a relationship gone and missed but the perservereance to continue on with life and forge new friendships and not to be detered by the past hurt put to push past it, i really enjoyed this one.
my only real critiqu is toward the beginning you put 'their' when I think you meant 'they're '
good work!

[Judas Hammer]

pretty piece. I like poem about loss when i can feel part of that loss. I really like the way you connected and took us through this moment. Nice write

[hannahspelledbackwards]

I really like this! It's inspiring and true. Congratulations on the contest!

[Karina Longo]

I don't see this piece as a poem - don't get me wrong though - to me, is more than that, I'd call this piece 'poetic words'. Words of wisdom, precious advices, experiences to be shared, inspirational motivations. Really good. :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Perseverance is a virtue, and knowing that regardless we have to move on and live and smile and create new memories. Very inspirational.