Anything is possible

Anything is possible

A Poem by Lust for Propinquity
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I dont know. Just my opinion I guess, but slightly true in some ways

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Anything is possible
Can I soar in the sky like a dove? 
Can I make a bear and a pigeon fall in love?
Can I change my name, my age, or skin tone?
For all my sins, can I atone?
If I can not do all I have said
Then can I at least bring a friend back from the dead?
Nothing is possible, at least not for me
So much in this world i'll never be able to see
It is sad, thats a true fact
But this whole "Anything Is Possible" thing is just an act
It is not true, and probably never was
It is sad to say, but the world isn't all cotton and fuzz
The world is heartless, and cruel, and mean
At least, that is the side of it I have seen
But I write these poems no matter how bad they are
To try to cope with how horrible life is so far
I dont think they will come farther than this 
But at least I found something in this world to miss
So anything isnt possible in our world today
But hopefully one day we'll find a way

© 2018 Lust for Propinquity


Author's Note

Lust for Propinquity
Um I personally am not sure of its quality but maybe someone out in the world will see it in a new light.

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honestly, I think this poem's a lot better than you probably think it is (you are usually your own worst critic!) yes, your rhymes in a few places do seem a little forced; however, I think for not doing poetry much, it's well done and a wonderful start! I can't wait to read your future writing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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We can start changing with small steps. And small steps became bigger and can inspire more and more people. You chose very good topic and make nice metaphor .everybody with open mind and heart can relate to this poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, we are always told..."you can do anything if you put your mind to it"---but unfortunately that is not true, and sets up big disappointments and lack of self-worth when we cannot achieve.
j.
"i'll" in ninth line...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing . I love the poem down to the last word. I can really relate to it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

honestly, I think this poem's a lot better than you probably think it is (you are usually your own worst critic!) yes, your rhymes in a few places do seem a little forced; however, I think for not doing poetry much, it's well done and a wonderful start! I can't wait to read your future writing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed the poem, you are clearly in your early developmental stages of writing and I commend your palpable efforts at creating a rhyme scheme. I look forward to reading more of your work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I am probably the most trouble prone person on earth. I dont do poetry much but I do some times, and when I do Im no Edgar Allen Poe or Shakespeare. Its mostly just stories, and i dont know why but im.. more..

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