Dragon's Tear

Dragon's Tear

A Poem by JoJo Q. Finsburry
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Old story from high school.

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	Dragon's Tear

	

	Dragon's bloody wrath  

And dragon's bloody bain 

 	Dragon's bloody sorrow 

And dragon's bloody pain 

 	Dragon's firey rule  

And bloody bodies strewn  

	Sulfur bloody burn  

And brimstone bloody ruin  

	Towers bloody burn  

All spires in upheaval  

	Bloody ruins remain  

As dose the bloody evil  

	Dragon's bloody work  

And dragon's bloody ache  

	Bloody damn them all  

To the bloody firey lake

© 2011 JoJo Q. Finsburry


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I bloody love this poem
A dragon theme is rarely used but i'm glad that when used it has this level of writing tied in with it
I really enjoyed the repetition and the structure of this poem
I will be sure to read your other work
thank you for sharing
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You use the word "Bloody" a lot in it, but that's okay, because, it is a great poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I bloody love this poem
A dragon theme is rarely used but i'm glad that when used it has this level of writing tied in with it
I really enjoyed the repetition and the structure of this poem
I will be sure to read your other work
thank you for sharing
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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JoJo Q. Finsburry
JoJo Q. Finsburry

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Q. = Quixotic If you were wondering :P Most of the stuff i've posted is actually REALLY old stuff but i crave writing, and will be doing more, so if my style changes, please forgive. more..

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