-Rien-

-Rien-

A Poem by Maximus. R.
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Me Philosophy.

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In an epic battle between good and evil the sagest stance one ought to stand for is nothing, for a champion of light is also the bearer of darkness.

 

© 2008 Maximus. R.


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Wow, that seems to be pretty well thought out, in fact I might start using this in my day to day lif...Hey! Wait a minute, the neutral people set you up to this didn't they?

No but in all seriousness, it's always better to be neutral but evil doesn't seem to ever care to see the difference between good and neutral, and without good, neutral dies, so it might be the sagest thing to do for your own interest, but not for the rest of the world's interest.

That's of course considering that evil never truly has a choice to make, while good can always be lazy or scared.

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this does not fit any of the criteria for the contest.

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Fantastic.

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Wow, that seems to be pretty well thought out, in fact I might start using this in my day to day lif...Hey! Wait a minute, the neutral people set you up to this didn't they?

No but in all seriousness, it's always better to be neutral but evil doesn't seem to ever care to see the difference between good and neutral, and without good, neutral dies, so it might be the sagest thing to do for your own interest, but not for the rest of the world's interest.

That's of course considering that evil never truly has a choice to make, while good can always be lazy or scared.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very interesting series of wriings will be back to review

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I might not fully agree with the sentiment, but the philosphical value is spot on. I agree with Orlando here; tighten up the first half, as "stance" and "stand for" is redundant. Try "In an epic battle between good and evil, the sagest stance is none..." Good work!

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I love this mate. I BS you not. You could tighten the bit before the comma, but the bit after is wisdom.

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Welcome to the Cafe. I hope that you will find your time here as wonderful as I have.
I must say your quote leaves many thoughts long after the page is closed.

Lesa

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely agree. The trick is to balance both!

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I think that this would have looked better in an a more traditional form, but the idea is great anywayz.

Great write brother, great write.

A.M.

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Interesting thoughts. Very interesting. Never would have even thought about the end line. Thank you ^^

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