Enchanter

Me Philosophy

I have dreamed last night that I made love to you,and in my dream I taught you how to make love, with loving gestures I whispered the words that you loved to hear as I undressed you for the first time. The whiteness of your bare body in front of my distraught hands. UNFINISHED SORRY.

Reviews

[DeAn]

Where once I ravaged her, you merely graze the surface of her shell.

NEVER as deep shall you traverse to even catch a glimpse of the hole created by our painful seperation, for she covers it and seeks solace in the distractions around her here, such as yourself. All this, that she might forget her bindings and find such a false hope as to ride unto the end of chaos and it's new beginning.

I spoke only truths she could not deny. Painfull memories too much to bare, in a world she wishes to share in. So again she has run, yet once more.

And you speak boldly less, with an air as if you know, yet are as blind unto the end in your tales as the sheep you sing unto, oh foolish and false bard.

you are a mere shadow in the brilliance of the sun my dear friend.

Deal with it.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Love the begginings of this prose, anyhoot, hope you get inspired to soon, =) :S ---mishy

[Rhine Wolf]

i have to agree with The Viking, so please do finish it!!

Blessed be,
Fallon

[The Viking]

you know you can keep this in unpublished mode where only you can see it until it's done and you're ready to publish it. It's got potential, so by all means, finish it.