You love the dark (In me)

Just a love poem

I could never find the might

 

Until you opened up my sight

 

You loved my dark

 

I hugged your light

 

You were love

 

I was fight

 

But she loves you and you love me

 

So we are never truly free.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Honorable Mention

May 8, 2015

 

• Heartbreak Poetry
• You love the dark (In me)

 

 

 

 

working hard or hardly working?

Dec 31, 2014

 

• Poems that speak from your heart
• You love the dark (In me)

 

 

 

 

3rd place

Dec 24, 2014

 

• Passionate Writing
• You love the dark (In me)

Reviews

[Lexi Richard]

So simple, yet it has so much raw emotion in it. Such an interesting take on heartbreak. I'd love to read more of your poetry.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you very much Lexi for your kind review!

[Brenda Woods]

Ooo, the rhyming is very nice in this - short and simple, but definitely gets straight to the point and has a nice flow to it. The last two lines are perfection. Keep up the great work (also yay for being fellow Kiwis!)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

thank you for your kind review. Yay to that!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the use of opposites. Love and life is never fair. We seem to be in the wrong place. I like the twist in thoughts and words leading to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[TheSecretAuthor]

This was simple yet brilliant, and i like the short, blunt, twisted rhyming, it gives it a nice effect. Well done! One of your best, i think. :)