And I couldn't stop

A girl kills her lover in a fit of rage

You were so beautiful

You had a smile that could light up the world

You always looked after those in need

I guess that's how you met me

Your hair was the colour of the sun

Your skin was as soft as velvet

Now your smile is broken

Teeth cracked in your mouth

Now you need help

You need help from me

Now your hair is streaked with red

And you skin is bruised and broken

Now you lie, cold on the floor

The boy I loved

The boy I love

And all because

I couldn't stop.

 

Author's Note

Again WTF!!!

Reviews

[Dan L. B.]

I like this. Despite its free-verse style, it contains its own rhythm. Read some of my work and tell me what you think.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Thank you and I will