I promise

I promise

A Poem by Valkyrie Warrior
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I promise darling. This time I will keep it.

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I promise darling this time I wont hurt you

I promise darling this time I will not get angry


What are you doing stupid boy

Stop crying

Relax, this time darling I promise not to break you


How could I do this to you again

This time darling

This time


I promise

 




© 2015 Valkyrie Warrior



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This reminds me of my ex. What was sad was every promise he made he meant at that time but he couldnt keep them. He didnt know how.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

2 Years Ago

I am glad you could relate. Well actually no, I guess relating is a bad thing in this case. But than.. read more
underthemask

2 Years Ago

It's always good to know you're not alone so I am glad that I could relate. I like the poem along. I.. read more
Valkyrie Warrior

2 Years Ago

Well that's a great way of looking at it! Thank you for the kind review!
This time my darling you touch of great beauty and simply to open hearts. Magic is at your hands and soul. GREAT.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

2 Years Ago

Wow thank you heaps!!
every well done :) :) u were able to talk about things that happen in relationships and what many ppl go through when they are in them :) :) amazing job :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Justin

2 Years Ago

u are amazing writer :) :)
Valkyrie Warrior

2 Years Ago

Man! And you are an amazing friend, so there!
Justin

2 Years Ago

:) :) : thanks :) :)

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Added on October 23, 2015
Last Updated on October 23, 2015
Tags: dark, poem, drunk, beating, violent

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Valkyrie Warrior
Valkyrie Warrior

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