one.

this ones for you.

I lied when I said I didnt love you,

you lied when you said you agreed.

I tried, and tried, and tried again,

I gave you my everything.

 

It's too bad you cant love me.

 

I'm running in circles around you,

but youre walking across the world,

its hard for me to keep up,

because I am only one girl.

Reviews

[Pakino]

The last stanza really captures the essence of the relationship in my opinion. It was the strongest and most powerful.

[Dan Bullock]

I lied when I said I didnt love you,
you lied when you said you agreed.

- I love the pure strength in those opening lines, I kind of want you to rewrite with more strength from yourself because - even though I don't know you - I think you've got more than you think you have :)

[Brianna Brie]

This reminds me of "How to lose a guy in ten days". He said, "Andy, your like an one woman circus, freak show." Anyway I love your ending line. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[Stephanie W.]

i liked this a lot. well done.