Nano Doctor

Nano Doctor

A Poem by R.R.Louderback
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SciFaiku is simply Haiku with any, all, or none of the usual rules with the inclusion of one simple constraint: the topic must be related to science fiction. My efforts will attempt to adhere to the The SciFaiku Manifesto.

Nano Doctor


Long 3-5-3 syllables

nano Doc
cure me unseen bots
rebuild me


Short 2-3-2 syllables

doctor
inject bots
unseen


Traditional 5-7-5 syllables (same as in Japanese)

nano doctor please
move my molecules around
build me back up again


English 7-9-7 syllables

inject me with the unseen
move around my atoms with your tech
make me well from inside out


Freeform 17 syllables (three phrases, short, longer, short)

nanobots slide into the skin
they do their work invisibly and clean
they leave you healthy

 

© 2009 R.R.Louderback


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R.R.Louderback
R.R.Louderback

Knightdale, MO



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I'm a former programmer, analyst, teacher for a big telecom. Retired after 25 years due to the sudden onset of blindness (I am visually impaired, not sightless) I now spend my time writing. I'm a p.. more..

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