Breaking up

Scared out of my mind

i feel like its timed

everything falling through

falling in around you

 

repeating your words

your voice pulling chords

im choking back tears

trying to swallow all my fears

 

we should have had it all

shouldnt have worried about having to fall

but everything changed

sad to say love doesnt stay the same

 

keeping my voice quiet

looking at the stars in the night

trying to figure everything out in my sight

attempting to make it all right

 

wishing it didnt hurt so bad

hoping that i wouldnt be so sad

and now i dont know what to do

because i'm for sure i'm in love with you

Author's Note

so i'll appreciate some comments and please do ignore misspelling

Reviews

[la Abeja]

I LOVE this. I am a sucker for sad, longing and hopeful poems and this piece had all three. Great write!