i hide my face

I hide the pain

i cover up the stain

i look at you

and you look straight through

 

i want you to ask me

if this is all we'll ever be

i want you by my side

i want our hearts to collide

 

im trying to hide

the feelings inside

but i feel so bare

of the feelings i do share

 

im tired of this chase

this is the last time i hide my face

 

 

Reviews

[Laura Sparkle]

Great poem. Many, including myself, have been in the position to wear a mask. May I recommend some punctuation marks so that the reader doesn't feel rushed? But other than that, a great job.