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A Poem by Veronica Staehle
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fruit

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Bite
into the apple-
let the juice
drip down your chin.

© 2017 Veronica Staehle



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That was very creative to describe a fruit!!! Great job!!

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Sensual, well to me, probably not to Adam or anybody with an as yet unidentified Apple allergy.


Posted 9 Months Ago


Is this a pleasure piece? Maybe a little more for.me to understand

Posted 9 Months Ago


lick the nectar,drink the juice


Posted 11 Months Ago


Some apples can be sweet and some apples can be sour. Pleasure or pain. Always a remembered taste. Nice use of words dear friend.
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Posted 11 Months Ago



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Added on September 1, 2017
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Veronica Staehle
Veronica Staehle

New York, NY



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Private personal writer; creative writing, poetry, and documenting. blog: www.loveronica.com portfolio: www.veronicastaehle.co more..

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