Unknown Feeling

Confused Feeling/s

Feeling in love is a happy feeling and the feeling of being loved back is beyond words to describe how you felt but being only the one who love and not being loved back making me wants to forget about the word “Feelings”.

I've been trying to hold back the feelings that I know I shouldn’t be felt,

But feelings are for you to feel, how can you exactly stop feeling?

Maybe, It’s the same as, how can you stop breathing while you still want to live?

How ironic. 

Reviews

[khalid]

umm, i love the way you used the word feelings in most of the lines...since the poem is much concerned to feelings, it was felt boring how often you used it..i liked the similarity you made between feeling and breathing...i liked the words picking and the flow....

very nice wonderful writing really..i have enjoyed reading it..

[Sydnye Louise]

good write. I like it