If you really knew me...

If you really knew me...

A Poem by dreamer :)

If you really knew me...

You would know that I'm sympathetic for everyone,

You would know that I feel like my sister is better than me,

You would know that I feel like I need to be better,

You would know that I'm hurting inside,

You would know that I lost my best friend,

You would know that I used to hate myself.

You would know all of these things,

If you really knew me...

If I really knew you...

What would I know?

© 2010 dreamer :)


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My god this is a good piece and i could relate to it 'cause all what you said are nearly like my situation specially about the sister and the best friend thing , wow i never thought that there will someone in the world that feels like me , well done i loved this one

Posted 10 Years Ago


We always expect others to know us..but that is so much to expect from others..what we can expect is to know ourselves wholly,that would be much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thanks guys!!! That means a lot! I'm glad you liked it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol I actually felt like saying YAY at the end there because I was happy that the ending was sooo good! This was a great poem! I love it :-)


Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the repetition in this piece. The last two lines really end the poem nicely. This was a great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 29, 2010
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I absolutely love to write!!! It's so much fun, and I always find myself either in a great book, or writing my own little story. It's the only way to escape the real world, and still express your emot.. more..

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A Poem by dreamer :)