The kiss

Shortest Poem I've written yet

Liquid light this kiss.
Traveling through me ~
Warming places ~
Your lips have yet to touch.
Such a kiss is this.
The kiss yet to come.

Reviews

[Susan S.]

Echos of classic poetry.

[Sarah]

"The kiss yet to come." Wonderful line, Great work! Really shows the anticipation of a first kiss. At least it does to me. Keep up the wonderful work!

[Ani Ashford]

Oh, you have captured that lovely moment when the sparkling energy of the kiss makes your whole body tingle with anticipation, waiting for more. It also has a dimension of the spirit realm as well. Well done.

[R J Askew]

The notion of the kiss being liquid light is lovely as is the notion of how it is travelling and has not yet actually arrived. So reality is nicely bent in several ways here. Lovely stuff.

[Robert Luna]

I love piece about kisses. I think it is such a passionate exchange of souls in a way. Being connected for a moment in time. I really liked this and the flow was perfect. You really captured an purity of the act of kissing.


Great JOb!!!!!!

[DarkAngelWriter]

Wow. I love this. It made me want that kiss :( lol

[justjenn_2u]

Very intimate piece. I love it. Keep up the good work!!!!

[Emily B]

Amazing. Lovely. Wistful. Expectant. Exhilirating.

[John Braswell]

It may be short but it says a lot. Well done - good read