dad when is a friend a reall friend?

dad when is a friend a reall friend?

A Story by Ava gray
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what my dad said to me when i asked "when is a friend a reall friend

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"Dad when is a friend a reall friend?" my dad looked up from his book"will you see son a friend is only a reall when they think of you and them as the same" 
Umm, what if they are a girl?"
"son,not the same in that way"
"what way then dad?"
"the way the you look at them and not think 'im better then them' and they not look at you think 'im better then him' but you look at them and think that you and them are the same"



© 2017 Ava gray



Author's Note

Ava gray
sorry its not great

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It makes sense! Have faith in yourself! Very true what this story tells. Real friends do not compete, they love one another as they love self. Only part I did not undersand is the "what if they are a girl."

Posted 6 Months Ago


I think there's a lot of very genuine emotion here, that's expressed simply and in a very sincere way. Nice job.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Did you not proof-read this? Sorting out the spelling, syntax and punctuation would help. Don't give up! You can do it!

Posted 6 Months Ago


It is a very powerful message.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Ava gray

6 Months Ago

thank you!!
it is great and did your dad reall say all that?

Posted 6 Months Ago


Ava gray

6 Months Ago

yes! and thanks

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Ava gray
Ava gray

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