Dysfunctionalism

Dysfunctionalism

A Poem by Luis g
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i got the motivation to write this after feeling a surge of emotions brought on by a girls skewed perception of me

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Whisper everything and absolutely nothing to me at the same time.
Show me how much you love me by snorting this last line.
Its funny how i can love and hate this life at the same time.
Remember what it was like to be nine? Before the thought of crime even crossed your mind and when you were hurt someone was always thier to comfort you till you were fine.
But death is a freedom for those that disperse and just the reverse for those whom it hurts.
Once the deed is done your left to bare the curse.
Everything hurts so when something happens you always see the worse. Nothing works but your mind state is affected with the use of drugs nothing seems defective.
You think you have it perfected so you share the substance now everyones infected.

© 2012 Luis g


Author's Note

Luis g
i would like to know what feelings get brought up if any also I'd like to know your thoughts and bluntly honest opinions and what kind of picture / story my words create in your head.

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Ooo...this is really good. For me it paints a picture of how life was so innocent and as you grow...life becomes darker because of all the experiences one goes through. Help is there only if you seek it unlike as a child.. your given help no matter what.
This is really interesting. And it made me think how some people really do choose to go take drugs because it's to feel like your escaping from the pain that is striking you in your heart. But it's only.. for a while till reality sets in..
Hmm..this poem is deep for me! I enjoyed it. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ooo...this is really good. For me it paints a picture of how life was so innocent and as you grow...life becomes darker because of all the experiences one goes through. Help is there only if you seek it unlike as a child.. your given help no matter what.
This is really interesting. And it made me think how some people really do choose to go take drugs because it's to feel like your escaping from the pain that is striking you in your heart. But it's only.. for a while till reality sets in..
Hmm..this poem is deep for me! I enjoyed it. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply and deep. Well done !

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really great poem! I think the poem to me is about how tough life can be and how when it gets too hard for people they turn to drugs to numb the pain. To me though it seems quite witty rather than an emotional poem, maybe i just strange! Good poem though!
(One thing, you spelt there wrong! Just for perfection :) )

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 8, 2012
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Luis g
Luis g

vinelans, NJ



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