Little Daniel

Little Daniel is a very innocent kid, he doesnt believe in leaving his home . This poem is about him, every one has a little Daniel inside him .

and what you do little Daniel,
inside your hut,so cold and shut,
You look alone, you live solo,
empty ,detached , sorry ,hollow.


This mo differs from rest of them,
look night shines just like a gem,
so white and bright ,ablaze alight,
come little Daniel see moonlight,
You know how this new night looks,
like numb words or dead troops
like white grease or warnish,
like a funeral last wish.
Oh little Daniel come out and sit
You will like it,you will like it.


in party robes ,come out and shout,
mouth some voice, make some sound,
in necropolis move around,
you'll find some friends of your age,
crying in greed, living in rage,
just play with them , befriend them,
these moments of joy come seldom.
And wolves will also come,
and dogs will be with them ,
to play the game of glaciers,
in damp lands of your fears ,
you hide from them, they seek you
you tease them, they abuse you,
and its all in fun, just pun.


Little Daniel, you need to grow,
from birdling to ugly crow,
a world avid , then waits you ,
outside your hut , in long queue,
for you they have the best mask,
and bad things and baneful task.
Oh Daniel ,dear Daniel
just join them, just join them,
your hut will be then mansion,
amusement where chicks will come,
and wines of love and dance of lust,
and pain of joy and force of thrust.


Little Daniel , you are a kid,

I will make sure you also fit,

to this world , world of fibbers,

of cretins and story keepers,

leave that s**t , you call right way,

paint this heart with black spray,

and you will be then not alone,

welcome to this, this world of clones,

so dance and drink and smoke and dope,

Little Daniel  live up to my hope.

Author's Note

Any suggestion of any sort is most welcome.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

You've personified childhood and innocence into such an adorable kid. It is true that everyone has a Little Daniel inside; it's just that some people have been corrupted too much, he's almost disappeared. The concept of this poem is really interesting and deep. Also, it was presented with a good flow and nice choice of words.

Keep Writing. ^___^