It's Over

life shows you things in frames during moments when you least expect to see what has to be seen. and its then that the facts slap you in the face with the truth that you've tried to bury.

Sitting in the car, driving home from the movies, I could see the rift between them. Invisible, harsh and defiant, the line stood strong between them. My parents never looked each other in the eyes but words crossed between their lips in harmful snaps. Sitting in the car, I prepared myself for the inevitable. For the time when my family broke and we would no longer be whole. "Goodbye." I murmured.

Author's Note

i made this for a contests. reviews, advice, criticism and all that appreciated.

Reviews

[Michelle Allende]

i like it gets you thinking and questioning and wondering.. why why is it over..

[i wish to win you with ..]

why are they all so sad!?? :(( lol id ask something but i dont want to start up anything again lol

[Mistral Bilgera]

sad poem... nice piece.... good luck on the contest =)