All the idle words

My first work here.

I was standing here before, 

esta noche but still I'm scared by the view.

Could you please wait for me this time?

esta oscuro I can't feel you, I can't reach you

Then they're taking

I see them  in front of me

curse the idle words

should I be quiet?

Explode tiny pieces in my head

and then I watch behind me one more time

nada te detiene but I'm afraid of falling

the shattered view of you above me

Then they're taking

I see them  in front of me

curse the idle words

should I be quiet?

Desvaneciendose lentamente

contemplando tu figura indeleble... 

please stay this time

i don't want to fall in the dark

but I'm not that strong

I want to feel you close to me

Author's Note

The parts in Spanish are the ones that the choir is singing behind.

Reviews

[Chaos Rain]

I really love this poem, I think that it has a nice flow and very good word choices. I especially like the parts that are in Spanish, because they make the poem stand out. I like how you don't give away the entire situation, and instead you leave it up to the audience. I hope that helped!
Love,
Chaos Rain

[TeenRomance2]

I love that! Sometimes I write "Spanglish" poems. I think it should be a rising genre. Very cool. =^-^=