NIGHT, TIME

the inevitable

a swelling

of

combined hidden entities

powerfully awake

tugging on the

rope

around your neck

come

and

be a part of this sickly

infinite mortality

blackened,

hidden

by the cloak of night

that you can only

pray will end

but

always

you catch the moon’s

flickering gaze

an overwhelming murmur

whistling through

the labyrinth

of intricate complications

that is your

body

to surface the reminder

that upon us will

fall

a night

that never ceases

Reviews

[Kiwi.jh]

Your wording is amazing, it really helps the work flow. I love the way you describe things, its a really great piece. Hope you continue to write more because it's truly amazing.

[lua]

thank you, i really appreciate your kind words