Mirror, Mirror

this is a personal poem that i written based of my older brothers haiku mirror mirror thanks bro! plz review!

Mirror Mirror  on the wall

Why am I ignored by all?

Why doesn't anyone listen to what I have to say?

Why am I treated this way?

Is it because I am unlikable?

Or am I unreliable?

Is it because I am a freak?

Or is it because I am useless or weak?

Mirror Mirror please answer me

Why can't anyone like the real real me?

Why can't anyone look at me and see

That I have a giving heart that size is times three?

Why can't they see that I am kind?

Why is it that a friend is what I can't seem to find?

Mirror Mirror on the wall

Hanging there about to fall

I realize that now my search has come to an end

For you are my only friend

Author's Note

PlZ REVIEW!

Reviews

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

I definitely love the realism in this poem because you can see you completely, you are transparent and being open and honest with your feelings. You've removed your mask and have become vulnerable to the rest of the world. And of course, who isn't a sucker for a "fairy tale" and Mirror Mirror on the wall is about a deeply hurt woman that has turned evil. She on the other hand hides from her pain by expressing herself angrily upon the world. While you sit back and wonder, why? I am glad that you are still showing your kind heart instead of allowing the pain to boil as the evil queen does. I am proud of you for standing up and expressing yourself without shame and through beautiful poetry. I just wish you weren't feeling so sad and alone because you aren't and you'll never be.

[lua]

this poem conjures up questions we have all asked ourselves, a powerful reminder we're not alone with our thoughts despite the isolation they bring, well written

[Sarah Lynn]

I absolutely loved this poem. The wording was very well put and clever. Good work!

[Andy~]

Very relatable. This is a very beautiful poem. And I love the last few lines - in my opinion, they were the most powerful of all the lines. Keep writing, keep up the good work!

[lyricalprince]

thank you I really appreciate it :)

[Andy~]

You're welcome (:

[Skitsy]

Why can't they see that I am kind?
Why is it that a friend is what I can't seem to find?

This part is something I can relate to from my past, very good indeed.

[Riding the Rainbow]

Thank you for posting this real poem..
It shows your insides and your pain..
It goes with my work as well..My journal and my stories are full of pages of pain and emptiness..
You're not alone in here..plz know that..

[lyricalprince]

thank you I really appreciate it

[Lily Siti Multatuliana]

mirror mirror on the wall
hanging there about to fall
I realize that now my search has come to an end
for you are my only frieng...

nice ...

[annabellee]

"Mirror Mirror on the wall
Hanging there about to fall
I realize that now my search has come to an end
For you are my only friend"
I loved that part, so powerful and full of emotions like the whole poem.
Well done :)

[lyricalprince]

thank you im glad you enjoyed this poem

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[K. Rae Canter]

Your poem is relatable and beautiful. I love it.

[Ray Cheshire]

That was really good. Something I noticed was the way you were able to make words rhyme well still keeping them relevant to the poem. You don't see that very often

[lyricalprince]

thank you but it was my brother's haiku that gave me this idea for this wonderful poem!