What would I tell her.

What would I tell her.

A Poem by Miles W.
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Basically a poem I thought of the thought process that I might go through if I ever told somebody I loved them.

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How would I tell her,
That I cared with all my heart
About her.
How would I tell her?
Would I say that she has great hair?
Or maybe that she knows what to wear?
Perhaps I could recite a poem
or a sonnet, or a romantic tome.
Maybe I could give her a bouquet,
of roses and other things I picked that day.
Maybe I could sing a song
like a serenade from days long gone.
Or maybe I could be me
And tell her what I really think.
I think that she is a wonderful human being
With a heart for the Lord that simply just sings.
Her smile is amazing to see.
It shows a heart with willingness to be.
A devotion to the Lord like none I've ever seen.
And such intellect, so keen.
But in the end it comes down to one thing.
I love her, because her heart makes me sing.

© 2014 Miles W.



Author's Note

Miles W.
She knows the truth. She has seen the poem and given me an answer. Read "The Circle is Complete" to get an understanding of what happened.
Please review and tell me what you think.

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I think this is beautiful. So beautiful, like what i would want someone to tell me. Well done. I love it

Posted 1 Month Ago


I understand the feeling of this poem completely.
"I love her, because her heart makes me sing."
I love it!!! very inspiring to my

Posted 3 Months Ago


Would I say that she has great hair?
Or maybe that she knows what to wear?
Hahaha... This is so cute
And tell her what I really think.
I think that she is a wonderful human being
These lines touched me.... well done great write

Posted 6 Months Ago


"I love her, because her heart makes me sing"
So very beautiful. One thing I would fix though, would be the word flow. Because It is free verse, things can always get smoother.
But great job! I'll have to read the part 2!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Well done my friend, every time I read one of your writings I learn something new and unique.
You have done amazingly well in describing your emotions. It seemed to me like you were singing it.
Now I am going to read "The Circle is Complete" because I want to know her reactions after reading this beautiful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Aawwww, this is so sweet, I literally starting cooing in front of my family, great job

Posted 2 Years Ago


I loved reading this. You obviously love your significant other. It is shown so clearly in this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Miles W.

2 Years Ago

Yeah....if I had a significant other....
Crazycatgirl_10

2 Years Ago

Aww. But when you do give them this...its great.
Miles W.

2 Years Ago

Sadly, I already have. Didn't work.
Very well done poem. Used great words, and expressed a very strong meaning.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Dee
This is an excellent poem, well written! I especially like that you thought about what things you could give to her, and in the end, you decided to give her the greatest treasure of all, words spoken from your heart.

Posted 3 Years Ago


She would read this and she would know. Very nice and whimsical. Kinda like plucking petals from a daisy - some wishful thinking ... with someone in mind as you think :) Good write

Posted 3 Years Ago



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