Closets

Closets cluttered up

There's dust bunnies on the floor

Spiders make their home

Reviews

[Ethan Paz]

Hahaha good description here. I like how you say "cluttered" caze too me that is really messy. Like books and clothes on the ground. I can imagine it but than you make it worse:

"There's dust bunnies on the floor."

Now everybody hates dust bunnies but than again you add more spice to the poem:

"Spiders make their home."

Good job. You are a very wise writer.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning Haiku.