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You probably think me ignorant.

Considering I can’t perform coherent sentences.

A novice to words.

No one has brought about such an effect.

Ahhh, this must be a lover’s madness.

 

God what is this chaos,

Why do you plague me so!

Wait, no not plague…

This feeling, UGH, I cannot put into words.

That’s a first.

 

Such piercing blue eyes,

Though green sometimes.

I wonder to your lips.

I ache to trace.

As if my eyes gave away.

You smile.

S**t.

 

Ache turns to crave.

Want turns to need.

I can’t turn away.

What was is I just thinking?

Hell, it doesn’t matter.

As long as he touches me,

Loves me.

 

More,

I do not understand such a word.

Yet, that is what I crave for.

I don’t just want his touch.

I want his heart.

I want More.

But how can I give what I do not understand?

 

God what is this chaos,

Ahhh, this must be a lover’s madness.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and powerful words. I liked the reason and the meaning of the words. All of us want to feel loved and needed. Nice closing to the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lorry]

Lover's madness indeed. You capture the intensity and ferocity of emotions bouncing off the roof of your skull, as we try to comprehend one single thought without being distracted by the cacophony of all the others vying for first place in our thought, while suffering that lover's madness. Superb.

[M.A.]

Thank you for taking the time to read and review this. I always look forward to your reviews.

[Lorry]

As I do with your writes :)

[Jay]

I see what you did here....and it's pretty clever to say the least. Needless to say that I enjoyed this piece,especially since it's relatable to those who have experienced the maddening phase of being the object of attention for the one they love...There play thing,only to be tossed aside in the end. A lovers madness is only the beginning of our insanity....we want more.
Brilliant piece I must say
Keep at it mate

[M.A.]

Thank you so much for your review friend. You always seem to understand the deeper meaning behind my pieces. Always look forward to your thoughts.

[ReedWrite]

A lover's madness indeed.
What a beautiful poem.
It evokes so much emotion...and so poignantly.
Nicely done.

[M.A.]

Thank you so much for you review.

[Donyay Thomas]

this is sweet and deep, i love it i cant wait to see more

[M.A.]

Thank you for you review. It was much appreciated.