Son

That day I was granted a son,

My joy unmeasurable.

He was so small and innocent,

all his parts clean and bright.

Falling asleep in my hands,

only moments after birth.

He grew to learn from me,

acted liked he was my right hand.

Ever attempting to fit in my shoes,

clowning around for the photos.

I taught you what I could,

as you taught me how to love.

Early days of school,

ever watching you grow.

Those math problems,

along aside the spelling tests.

Not feeling equal to the task,

somehow you carried me through.

From the day you learned to tie a bow,

then pedaling so ever fast.

You never showed your fear,

as I concealed mine.

Summer ends with school days,

till receiving that parchment.

Keeping your eyes to the prize,

my pride as you grew into a young man.

The day you were born I wish you to be like me,

However, by “GOD's” hand you became a better man.

Your fate ended far too soon,

never fulfilling your destiny.

For you might have left this world,

however, you will never leave my heart.

Author's Note

After a tragic accident last year I wrote this about a friends Son who lost his life in that accident.
He was a young man who left us far too early. He was loved by many. I share this with a gift to him and his family.


RIP Nate Raffol 1995-2014

Reviews

[dan]

As a father myself this takes me back 32 years when I was blessed with a son. So much realism tied around this piece that it reads like a biography. To have such a great son only to lose him is unthinkable. This piece is extremely touching and gave me a lot to think about. Thanks for sharing with us. take care...dan

[Michael Wright]

Thank you for your comments

[youngkingkwan]

Very tragic indeed. Sorry for the losses you have endured. This poem is the beauty that can emerge from complete darkness.

[pikachulover]

A very touching poem, father's love, his feelings.....great! :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I have a son, an only child...this struck the very core of me! Beautifully written, Michael!

[Michael Wright]

Thank you for you review and kind words