Love

Heart

This pain does keep

time with love

on burdened wing

I fall

Reviews

[Emm'here]

Amazing.

[Tasha]

This was beautiful, I loved it.

[dutch2lips]

goed write

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a gripping image you've created here~ pure visual/emotional connect~

[Nabil]

so short , but good.

[chris]

Succint and powerful. I like the way the majority of the poem is monosyllabic like a heartbeat.

[Art]

nice work Maggie...emotionally the bitterness of pain keeps us within that memory of ended love and the heart is where it hurts the most...

[ImagineItAll]

So simple and so beautiful.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I love poems that can speak volumes with just a few mere words. xo