Now and Then

Now I see me looking, writing, jugding, fighting off my life...

But all you can say is that you critisize me for my deeds and past...

But do you know me? No.

Thats why you critisize..To make you feel better...

And it used to be different and so now I look at you and say what a discrase to see you the way you are. And for me to say my strong words of wisdom that shame on me for my servise? Nope.

Im no longer a granted wish...I'm just a face of faces on earth that can not help everyone and now im fighting all of you moff to survive...Survive the pain and hurt you and all of you set upon myself.

Maybe you and i will change...Someday.

Reviews

This is good. I liked the flow. I think this is a piece a lot of people can relate to. Good way to express yourself!

[Audrie]

I enjoyed the non-stop flow. I feel it exudes a "this must be said" enegy. Nice work. Peace, balance, and harmony - audrie