I Need Your Love

I Need Your Love

A Poem by khyss

What we have isn't something new, its something that has been tucked away. It's not his face or his body, it's just him that allures me so much. I have started to believe he is becoming part of me. Every time I think of him, a flush of endearment. No matter the situation, we will always be so contained with one another, it's a knot that we can untie, we don't want to untie it either. 

© 2018 khyss


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This was incredible. You are such a talented poet. I loved the description and the wording. It's sophisticated and satisfying.

However, a bit of advice I might add, I feel like the title was a bit out of place in this poem. I understand that the poem was about love, but the title seemed to be a bit off topic and it looked as though it came out of nowhere.

Other than that, reading your poem was a delight. I hope to see more of these in the future of Writer'sCafe

Posted 6 Years Ago



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