A tiff with life..

My endeavour to reach eternal bliss.Travel the world to win my share of happiness and conquor the uncertainty of life.

Oh! Life bring me a maze of colours
To reframe those untamed dreams
To ornate those deep black eyes
To rewrite an untold story of mine.

As I travelled the years
With desire cocooned
In a blossom untouched
Life called out shrieking

There is a treasure hidden
Somewhere lurking around
Oh! girl wake up explore
You have to travel a little more.

Tired and bruised I walk along
Indefinite search of my paragon
Traverse with me the test of time
Unperturbed by its futility I fly.

I promise to come around
A reflection of eternal bliss
Into your eyes unveils an image
A victor embellished with the hue of sky.

Author's Note

This is my first poem for writers cafe.Please feel free to share your coments .

Reviews

[APOORVA]

lovely writing
good grasp on emotions and stringed flow
loved it

[Mala Mukherjee]

Tazeen Ahmed , thank you so much.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

a very impassioned poem!
beautifully expressed...
"Into your eyes unveils an image
A victor embellished with the hue of sky."
thank you for sharing :)