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A Little Time...


A Poem by Lori

All the blood that has been spilled...

Bodies broken against their will....

All the lives that we've lost...

How much does it really cost?

All the children left alone...

No place left to call their home.

All the parents that have cried...

Watching as their children died.

Have you nothing left inside?

Stop the hate, stop the crime.

We only have a little time...


© 2009 Lori



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This is a very good poem with a very good meaning. I, myself, am a pacifist, and don't believe in war. This poem seems to reflect the consequences of such ruthless actions (not just war, but all the ruthless acts that are done in anger and hatred) and gives such a simple solution, one that you think people would be able to understand. 'Stop the hate, stop the crime.' Very good message.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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