I remember

I remember

A Poem by Manasa.L

I remember them,
the day when I first 
laid my mind on you.
The day I felt that 
I was made for this.
The moment I wanted 
to be in your realm.
Yet distressed 
of my incapability.
You were so subtle,
made me 
even more vulnerable.
But here I stand now
urged to intact myself.
Being chosen from you,
gives an immense pleasure.
And intend me to 
be a skillful one.
Never again will 
back down from the 
milieu of writing.
The words have made 
me stronger.
Realize what I am 
and what I want to be.
I will remember this day
as the prolific day 
of my life.






© 2017 Manasa.L



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Manasa.L
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You have power to tell the story of what is on your mind and where they could be leading you to.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you falcon that is so kind of you
There is power in the pen. Power to transform us personally and also to change the world. Beautifully written Manasa.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you Divya
DIVYA

7 Months Ago

Keep writing Manasa. Its a beautiful journey. One that never ends. 🌺
You already are (a writer). I can tell from reading a first poem from your hand. You think like one :) I.I.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you So much Ivy ::)
Isabella Ivy

7 Months Ago

You are very welcome! :-) I. I.
Poem what take me deep . Than i exept wondrful.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank U.....:)
The confusion that we all go through before we ultimately build faith in ourselves...you have potrayed it very nicely.
Love it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you. I agree with you
for poets, the words make us stronger...the words give us purpose...

first line seemed a little awkward because the second line talks about one day....but then it all smooths out...and is an interesting journey of giving in to that feeling of writing that nags at some of us until we take it on.

j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Manasa.L

8 Months Ago

its right not many of us can make it to be a great writer but everyone sure are good writers.Thank y.. read more
You are a writer, no need of anyone saying that.
And You realised as you conveyed through I remember, Well Your words make you strong more than you now.
Thank you Manasa for sharing...:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Manasa.L

8 Months Ago

Thank you Surya I'm blissful with your words
Surya

8 Months Ago

Pleasure is all mine dear, I remeber, hahaha.Dont stop just go on.
Manasa.L

8 Months Ago

Yep I will
You are so talented,you are a future author,this work is a masterpiece!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Manasa.L

8 Months Ago

I don't know if I can be a author but still I will think of it Thank you.........:)
"The words have made
me stronger.
Realize what I am
and what I want to be."

This stood out for me. I like this but the poem needs a lot of work. Thank you for sharing...:)............

Posted 8 Months Ago


Manasa.L

8 Months Ago

Thank u for your generous words sami, I'll work on my writing
Sami Khalil

8 Months Ago

You are welcome muchly. ...:::)))))
Elegantly penned!
Good choice of vocab here!
Nice to meet you, Manasa. I see the extraordinary in your hand.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Manasa.L

8 Months Ago

Thank you Tazeen nice to meet you too, I hope you enjoyed reading my bit of writing

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Bengaluru, Karnataka, India



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