My School Collections

A memory

1.Teacher

Life is a mystery,

Teacher teaches history.

She tells us about parity,

And that's how she does her duty.

She solves the parlous problem,

isn't she paranormal.

Makes the dunce a paragon,

And that's what makes her special.

2. My Heart

My heart feels alone

without you.

You are a solemn girl

Whose hair is full of curl

Why don't you 

stay in my heart?

I am solicitous about you

My heart is waiting for you

the way we spent our childhood

how could I ever forget!

My friendship with you are like the sun and moon

to the earth.

Author's Note

These are my writings when I was in high school

Reviews

[Falcon1]

2 was a heart sweet poem by miles away way down the road many feel this way.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you, it's true friends are God's gift to life

[Jimmy Yetts]

Compelling early perspectives.
Shows the promise you are now fulfilling.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you for your time, its nice to hear from you.

[...]

Well done i caN FEEL YOUR FEELINGS AND RELATE TO THEM. BEAUTIFUL.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you Martin

[Stanislav Volo]

Nice! well done! When did you write this poem?

[Manasa.L]

Ha when I was in my high school(Class 9)

[Stanislav Volo]

That's right, it makes sense;

[Manasa.L]

Thank you VOLO

[DIVYA]

You were a budding writer even then. The insight you carry in you will make you a great writer, Manasa. Just keep writing.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you Divya for your encouraging words

[DIVYA]

Keep shining :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

We all cherrish the moments of our childhood and you expressed feelings extremely well :)

[Manasa.L]

thank you Sky:)

[Isabella Ivy]

I wish that I had kept my earliest writings. I did for a long while, but think they're gone now :/ These are stepping stones to where you are going and you can see your ability and potential even here. Good share :) I.I.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you for stopping by to visit.

[Isabella Ivy]

Sure thing! Kindest regards :)

[shabiyaswati]

It actually makes one think of their schook days...i love the one about the teacher.. ;)

[Manasa.L]

Thank you SS for your time:)

[shabiyaswati]

Welcome :)

[Surya]

Haha, it reminded me of my school, you are good writer since school....coming to my heart, shows the nature of friendship..
I loved these....
Thank you for sharing Manasa...:)

[Manasa.L]

Thank you for your precious time and words