Dazzling Daisy

Dazzling Daisy

A Poem by Manasa.L
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A beautiful flower

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Rumble and rustle,
leaves wither and die.
Daisies always smile.

Spring or summer,
gentle on the wounds.
Pain she cures.

Children and flower,
innocence dwells within them.
Daisy-chain beautiful delusion.

© 2017 Manasa.L



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Manasa.L
This is my first strike with haiku

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Enthralling trio, Manasa.
All possess an elegant beauty.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you...:)
A beautiful sense of Spring in your First haiku

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you............:)
these are beautiful haiku...
a three part tribute to that flower that seems to survive no matter what the impending weather...nice reference to those positive people who help us through hard times.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Yes the daisy may be delicate yet an amazing flower.Thank you for your time.
this reads very beautifully. there is a philosophical truth to it. it is deep on many levels and speaks to me of hope, beauty and healing. i always like anything with nature.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you Pete For your generous words.
You can be so perfect with any genre of poetry. A poem about a daisy and yet so touching and conveying! Wow.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you Sonakshi that is lovely words you said

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Manasa.L
Manasa.L

Bengaluru, Karnataka, India



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