Dazzling Daisy

Dazzling Daisy

A Poem by Manasa.L
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A beautiful flower

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Rumble and rustle,
leaves wither and die.
Daisies always smile.

Spring or summer,
gentle on the wounds.
Pain she cures.

Children and flower,
innocence dwells within them.
Daisy-chain beautiful delusion.

© 2017 Manasa.L



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Manasa.L
This is my first strike with haiku

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Enthralling trio, Manasa.
All possess an elegant beauty.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Manasa.L

10 Months Ago

Thank you...:)
A beautiful sense of Spring in your First haiku

Posted 10 Months Ago


Manasa.L

10 Months Ago

Thank you............:)
these are beautiful haiku...
a three part tribute to that flower that seems to survive no matter what the impending weather...nice reference to those positive people who help us through hard times.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Manasa.L

10 Months Ago

Yes the daisy may be delicate yet an amazing flower.Thank you for your time.
this reads very beautifully. there is a philosophical truth to it. it is deep on many levels and speaks to me of hope, beauty and healing. i always like anything with nature.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Manasa.L

10 Months Ago

Thank you Pete For your generous words.
You can be so perfect with any genre of poetry. A poem about a daisy and yet so touching and conveying! Wow.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Manasa.L

10 Months Ago

Thank you Sonakshi that is lovely words you said

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Manasa.L
Manasa.L

Bengaluru, Karnataka, India



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