One Last Time

One Last Time

A Poem by Manasa.L
"

Love Of Life

"
Walked on the water,
along the wind.
The ripples are fewer
yet could be seen.

Sang with the birds
to bask in sunshine.
The melody of the chirps 
couldn't mask voice of mine.

Tried to hide away
from your dangling eyes.
But you heaved away
every single obstacles.
Just to embrace
my cold body.
That's rested in a coffin,
for one last time.

© 2017 Manasa.L



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Beautifully lines with a touchy ending . . . keep sharing

Posted 5 Months Ago


Manasa.L

5 Months Ago

I will be Thank you.
You have identified well with your subject matter. Love the poetry and your imagination weaves a wonderful story. Will read more of your poems!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Manasa.L

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
BAHUT BADHIYA LIKHA HAI APNE

Posted 6 Months Ago


Manasa.L

6 Months Ago

Bahut khoob shukriya ji....:)
Great Aunt Astri

6 Months Ago

Oi, I can't understand this!!!! What language are you speaking ... I will have to look it up!
writ rajat

6 Months Ago

My mother tongue hindi indian languages
Has meaning does shine did you spill your glass of wine while you were writing somehow.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Manasa.L

6 Months Ago

No it just came out while reading some other writing from a textbook. Thank you.
Wow.

This is an awesome and very powerful piece, and it made me think. Looking at a piece that involves deeper thinking is always something that makes me smile, and this is one of those pieces.

Awesome work, keep it up :)


Posted 6 Months Ago


Manasa.L

6 Months Ago

Thank you Andrew. Deeper we think good thoughts come out and become art.
This is such a beautiful, thought-provoking piece. My heart melted with those last four lines.
Wonderful! :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Manasa.L

6 Months Ago

Oh! I am happy that you stopped by to read thank you.
Tina H.W.

6 Months Ago

My pleasure! :)
yes, this is a great perspective on our lives. powerful meaning and thought provoking. must cling to life no matter how hard or difficult. now i see why it clicks - i used to write software and love music too!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

thank you. I love music too and I'm also a software programmer.
You write amazing! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you S.A...Its nice to hear from you.
What a great Poem about the movement of one's Spirit. I could feel your journey. Beautiful.

Sheer Terror

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you....:)
A lovely and powerful portrayal creates a dramatic statement.
Love, life and death do, indeed, embrace.
Much enjoyed "One Last Time!"

Posted 7 Months Ago


Manasa.L

7 Months Ago

Thank you for those words Jimmy hope you enjoyed

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Added on March 19, 2017
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Tags: wind, ripple, birds, melody, hide, heaved, obstacles, embrace, cofin

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Manasa.L
Manasa.L

Bengaluru, Karnataka, India



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