Silent Love

Silent Love

A Poem by manisha

The day i saw you
In the corner of empty classroom
Lost in the bunch of books
You were far away from me
My heart thumped to sit behind you
Suddenly you turned back
I stunned under your gaze
Its kinda freak out
But it was the love of my first sight
I thought to deny the shallow feelings
Which was loveable unwilling
But it deppen down my heart
Which was not worth to break the silence
I was not ready to suffer the devastating pain
So i ended my love as silent love.

© 2016 manisha



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Yes you did a right thing according to me. If you love something let it go, if it comes back to you it is yours if it doesn't it was never meant to be.

Posted 9 Months Ago


manisha

9 Months Ago

thanks for your review i am glad u liked it
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
This is a poem that I feel a lot of readers can relate to. It is a sad but often repeated theme in everyone's life I am sure. I like the title and how you tied the poem to the title in the last line, "So I ended my love as silent love." So sad but often happens.

Well done

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks for ur review. I m glad u liked it. And i agree with ur point
Sometimes the fear of being hurt in love makes us take a step back and we do not pursue a relationship.
Someones eyes can really cast a magic.
well written but pretty sad.

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks shabeeh for ur review
I can definitely relate to this. I've once wanted to sit behind the girl I liked. I came so close one, but the teacher rearranged the classes' desk a day later.

-William Liston

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Ohh so sad it always happened with me :))
manisha

1 Year Ago

And thanks
I think many can relate themselves to the poem . Love can happen at any time but the fear of losing the person denies us to show our feelings . Nicely written explaining the emotions . Good one

Posted 1 Year Ago


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bilaspur, north-eastern, India



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