hide tears

hide tears

A Poem by manisha
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Just few lines crossed my mind. When i got scolded by my father.

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When you are tired of your life.
And wants your tears to be hide.
Go to bed and hold your pillow tight.
Sleep all night until your face,
Get a sweet smile.

© 2016 manisha



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Haha, that's a therapy..Will try it..:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


manisha

6 Months Ago

thanks for your review. :)
Hiding tears is the bravest thing one can do while putting on a happy face. This is nicely written..

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

manisha

11 Months Ago

Thanks for ur time and review glad u liked it...:)
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You are welcome ☺
that's what we do....very nice poem...thanks for sharing.. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks u liked it
When you are tired of your life.
And wants your tears to be hide.
Closed your eyes and reminded me
found me around you nicely
You are breavo of this life
Cant Acceft deficit of any kind
I will struggling for you
The life is the with you real life


Nice poem good I like it

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks for completing it. Although in tha piece first two line was mine and rest was suggested by fr.. read more
needs to be smoothed out ---the theme is really good---but the reading is a bit awkward...this has such potential with some slight editing.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks for advice i will do that. :)
It hurts when you are remanded by the people that you love.
Sleeping off that hurt, helps a lot.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I can certainly relate to the emotions expressed in this poem. Sometimes, all we have to do is sleep at night and wait for the next day for everything to be better. Thanks for sharing this piece. I truly enjoyed it.

-William Liston

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks you right every morning brings new hope.

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Added on July 2, 2016
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manisha
manisha

bilaspur, north-eastern, India



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About me.... there is nothing much.. i love writing its a way to express my feelings. And to convey those words which i can't express by speaking. more..

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A Poem by manisha