Am not saturated!

                                      Am not saturated

                                      Not even yet satiated

                                      I want to sink in deep

                                      Wanna feel beneath the skin

                                      That am so damp, damp, damp!

 

                                      I need to dump the feeling

                                      Right away

                                      As I can only sense dry and wry

                                      Is there a way out?

                                      I don’t wanna try hard anyway…

 

                                      Am half wet and half dry

                                      Half cooked and half uncooked

                                      It isn’t nice, is it?

                                      But that’s how I am

                                      And that is it!

 

                                      There is more to me

                                      Even I know

                                      Just don’t get the way

                                      As to how to show…

                                     

                                      To show my true colors

                                      I need a bathe

                                      For such a long

                                      That can soften my shell

                                      And shed it away…

 

                                      Its not funny

                                      That I look the way I am

                                      Coz am not saturated

                                      Not even yet satiated…

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Michael X]

one thing that sticks out is the natural rhythm, your flow comes to life,
i believe the meaning is openin to indivisual interpretation just enough,
which is an attribute, great job, you have talent.