The Rage Against Poseidon (RAGE TANKA)

We can't judge right away unless we know the backstory.

 

 

Her lips hex venom

Diabolic mind paints gore

Gives  horrific death

Crawling in the underworld

Rage is inexorable

Author's Note

I wrote this poem to give voice for Medusa one of the character in Greek mythology. I have this thought to give voice for her rage after Poseidon rape her and Athena turned her into a monster. I think she deserved a voice.

Reviews

[Ohhhwillow]

There is a based mythological aspect to this, (brought in though the title specifically, and then later on with use of "the underworld") that the captures imagination, and brings colour and visualisation to the fury and torment you portray. This said a lot, brought little - well done

[Ohhhwillow]

Someone has been watching Clash of The Titans haha!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This is a rage of Medusa after Poseidon rape her and Athena turn her into monster, in the realm of Hades. Thanks Willow glad you drop by and give this beautiful insights.

[Ohhhwillow]

I know the story heehee, it' no problem, anytime!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow :) we really connect when it comes to great mythology :) thanks Willow.

[InsanityWriter]

I really like this one! Especially that first line... ;) Amazing poem! I love Greek mythology!! ^_^

[SM Davis]

Haiku. Very well done. It is not often where I find a Haiku piece that is this exuberant. Another 100 daisies!

[Pete Langley]

You have managed to convey another dimension to a classic tale with real impact. Well written, mate. P.

[Pax]

a very nice perspective to Medusa, quite refreshing in fact. It's a different take on her nature, in your imagery you give her life in a fresh for me... a wonderful view kabayan...
short and very powerful, full blown impact! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting character. She got a bad rap in the new movies. In the books of myths. Reasons for her anger. I like the description. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Coyote :)

[char]

I honestly never saw Medusa as the monster. Scary what jealousy can do. Poseidon is an a*s. I enjoyed the read :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Anna :)

[char]

:)

[s y e]

Nicely written.... As always! ;) keep it up!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks N.H :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Brandon, I appreciate your precious time Bro.

[Jack...]

Marc, you once again add a mystical flair to this site. This was captivating for sure. Nicely done my friend.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks Mr. Jack, I just give Medusa a voice she deserved.

[Mike Emil]

sounds like so many of my old girlfriends
snakes, dragons
all the same

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) thanks Mike.