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A Poem by marcus

These ideas, are they mine
Or am I just feeding off
Of this, cosmic consciousness

And then I realize
My vanity
As I strive to find myself
I fail to lose myself
As I should
And become, everyone

© 2015 marcus



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I loved this one
The words used here are super strong and effective when it comes to making a point !!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Often we strive hard to be someone else then we get lost in who we should be. I always believe that we should challenge ourselves and strive to become more however when do we accept what is.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Descartes: I think therefor I am!

Posted 2 Years Ago


marcus

2 Years Ago

I write, therefore I am!
Bear

2 Years Ago

Good thing Rene Descartes died in 1650 or he would sue you for copyright infringement Ha! Ha!
marcus

2 Years Ago

shhhhh....
This was fun to read. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


marcus

2 Years Ago

glad you liked it!!
It is so hard to find where one ends and another begins... we are so melted into each other in so many ways... Your words profoundly voice this wild world in flux.

Posted 2 Years Ago


marcus

2 Years Ago

thank you!
awesome................
seems like you read my mind.......
amazing poem.....
love the simplicity....
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


marcus

2 Years Ago

Thanks!! I'm glad you are enjoying!
Contemplative look at relating. Not an easy subject, with fewer answers. Bravo!

Posted 2 Years Ago


marcus

2 Years Ago

thank you!!
I really like the self-reflection write. Full of thoughts and questions. Good work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


marcus

2 Years Ago

cool, thank Aaron, I was reading some Rumi, I think he inspired me!
Great reflecting lines marcus. great work here

Posted 2 Years Ago


marcus

2 Years Ago

Thanks Andrew!!
"As I strive to find myself I fail to lose myself" Wonderful lines. While I write poems, I tend to ask myself whether the ideas in my mind are mine or from somewhere else.

Posted 2 Years Ago


marcus

2 Years Ago

It seems we all ask that question, interesting!

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