Stars in your eyes

I see the stars 

every night 

in your eyes

i feel the galaxy inside 

as i listen to your heart beat 

and lay on your chest 

smiles for hours upon hours

giggles from you and me 

there's no one i'd rather spend my time with 

I will love you all of my days

the first time 

i saw you 

i knew it was true 

this love was forever just me and you

 

Ive waited for you

for all my life

i could never ask for anything more 

than to get this opportunity 

to spend each morning 

waking up to the stars in your eyes.

Reviews

[Moflo]

Very sincere love poem, great display of emotion and very descriptive! I liked the way you ended it.

Oh and you left a "k" out of the fourth stanza...sorry for being a grammar nazi