Crave~A Diamonte

crave
lust, thirst
imposing, longing, yearning
need you, please leave

unappealing, pushing, loathing
disgust,avert
repugnance
 

Author's Note

I'm experimenting with different forms of poetry. This is my first diamonte.

Reviews

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This is really fantastic. I love the contrast of the first and the last lines. And the transition of feelings in between shown in line 4. Nice work.
By the way thanks for checking out my work. I've just joined today and the turn out for my page has been fantastic.

[Natasha Ashway]

The cycle of attraction - beginning to end - in a nutshell?
I like it! Even if it made me a little sad at the thought.

[Prose-full]

nice..i wanna try this diamonte..thanks for stoppin' by to review.
love.peace and harmonious diamonte's.
-shean