I liked this poem. I miss the days of my grandmother song and my grandfather laughter. I agree with your thoughts. Song, laughter and smiles. The gold of life. Thank you Marilyn for sharing your wonderful words and thoughts.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
yes, I am sure your grandmother's songs and your grandfather's laughter made you feel happy and sec.. read moreyes, I am sure your grandmother's songs and your grandfather's laughter made you feel happy and secure... thanks for reading my poem.
I liked this poem. I miss the days of my grandmother song and my grandfather laughter. I agree with your thoughts. Song, laughter and smiles. The gold of life. Thank you Marilyn for sharing your wonderful words and thoughts.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
yes, I am sure your grandmother's songs and your grandfather's laughter made you feel happy and sec.. read moreyes, I am sure your grandmother's songs and your grandfather's laughter made you feel happy and secure... thanks for reading my poem.
I think that was my intention in the beginning all those commercials for beautification bah h.. read moreI think that was my intention in the beginning all those commercials for beautification bah humbug was what I was trying to say instead take the song that made u happy sing it and smile thanks so much for your comment and your last sentence from an imperfect wanna be poet
6 Years Ago
Our imperfection makes us human and that gives us a chance to touch the face of God...
6 Years Ago
yes we were all born imperfect though babies skin , eyes are soft and holds the promise of th.. read moreyes we were all born imperfect though babies skin , eyes are soft and holds the promise of the future love what u just wrote
was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..