just as i had given up hope

just as i had given up hope

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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miracles can happen with prayers and light

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i thought that  you had died.. but if one believes in reincarnation.. i now do..
you came back and you returned to me... never thought it would happen..
i had mourned your loss  for a long time.. 
then let you finally go, your spirit flying high
and then ,as if a miracle happened--  
one stormy night in my soul
you reappeared and took me
to that warm and reassuring place
called Home.....

© 2017 marilyn 1225


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Your message is so relatable! I bet most people reading this are reminded of some special person lost, but still "there" in so many ways. I believe certain people continue on in our lives, even when they are no longer here! You've made this sound & feel as comforting as it can be! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


love it. I know it has deeper meaning, but I don't want to know the details. - great great stuff.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

kind of you to read and to say something very nice and encouraging.. thanks
A sad, poem, or possibly a happy one. I cannot decide. Death, loss and then reincarnation? I am a little confused and yet intrigued also.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

well thanks for reading it is a happy poem about a once very sad experience of loss but then life.. read more
Karen Redburn

6 Years Ago

Good to learn it is a happy one, your welcome, cheers!
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

yes for certain cheers to you too!!

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Added on November 26, 2017
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marilyn 1225
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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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