just a little something ....

just a little something ....

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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to breathe
in  out and with a deeper breath, yet another
to end the suffocation
of the morning trial
lying flat at night  
leaves the lungs  tightly  wrapped-

so
inhale  on the inhalers
get up and breathe oh so much better

thankful for the day at hand
 without the restricting rubber band

marilyn nepp sturner    jan 2 2018


© 2018 marilyn 1225



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I hope this isn't your reality of one of your loved one's! I think not being able to breathe might be the scariest sensations & you've conveyed that sense of constantly having to maintain an acceptable level of oxygen when most people don't even have to think about breathing. Good details & good use of sensory! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

10 Months Ago

i am sure you have many publications so obvious you have such heart and talent
barleygirl

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I did technical writing for 30+ years . . . in the last 2 years, on this website,.. read more
marilyn 1225

10 Months Ago

GO for the creative side impressed about your technical writing though for so long.. wow is a.. read more



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A BREATHE OF FRESH AIR CAN DO WONDERS. THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM SO ENLIGHTENING AND INSPIRING. YOU ALWAYS FIND THE RIGHT WORDS TO EXPRESS WHATEVER YOU WANT TO EXPRESS THAT HONESTLY IT AMAZES ME.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

10 Months Ago

Thank you... i just sit at the computer and out come the words maybe by some extra force lol .. read more
sette

10 Months Ago

i am sorry to hear that but be well and be strong.
I hope this isn't your reality of one of your loved one's! I think not being able to breathe might be the scariest sensations & you've conveyed that sense of constantly having to maintain an acceptable level of oxygen when most people don't even have to think about breathing. Good details & good use of sensory! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

10 Months Ago

i am sure you have many publications so obvious you have such heart and talent
barleygirl

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I did technical writing for 30+ years . . . in the last 2 years, on this website,.. read more
marilyn 1225

10 Months Ago

GO for the creative side impressed about your technical writing though for so long.. wow is a.. read more

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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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