just a little something ....

just a little something ....

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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copd

"
to breathe
in  out and with a deeper breath, yet another
to end the suffocation
of the morning trial
lying flat at night  
leaves the lungs  tightly  wrapped-

so
inhale  on the inhalers
get up and breathe oh so much better

thankful for the day at hand
 without the restricting rubber band

marilyn nepp sturner    jan 2 2018


© 2018 marilyn 1225



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I hope this isn't your reality of one of your loved one's! I think not being able to breathe might be the scariest sensations & you've conveyed that sense of constantly having to maintain an acceptable level of oxygen when most people don't even have to think about breathing. Good details & good use of sensory! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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marilyn 1225

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for your compassion.. for my reality copd
you are one of the kindest people.... thank .. read more
barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

To me, sharing another person's reality is the best kind of writing.



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I hope this isn't your reality of one of your loved one's! I think not being able to breathe might be the scariest sensations & you've conveyed that sense of constantly having to maintain an acceptable level of oxygen when most people don't even have to think about breathing. Good details & good use of sensory! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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marilyn 1225

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for your compassion.. for my reality copd
you are one of the kindest people.... thank .. read more
barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

To me, sharing another person's reality is the best kind of writing.

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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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