space finally

space finally

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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years and years and then.....

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sometimes a person stays inside you   your thoughts and your cares and your questions and fears

then  Oh, the feeling of air and lightness when   he flies away
to his home, or to another
and finally you_  so busy with other internal things
have supremely 
 lost  him
and now.  just  my weary shoulders shrug
instead of those  ever lasting  imaginary hugs
marilyn nepp sturner  jan 30, 2018

© 2018 marilyn 1225


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Such a beautiful sad story to read.no doubt this is personal and directly from a broken heart

Posted 6 Years Ago


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marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

you are so understanding thanks so much as always
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

all is better now as my poem suggests
nice written poem marilyn it talks about realization too late. but sometimes love can be like that because we know we are not perfect.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

love can linger for decades in someone's heart but if it leaves it can be a new feeling of hope and.. read more

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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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