i love subs  i love pizza and olives

i love subs i love pizza and olives

A Poem by marilyn 1225

no salt  no sugar

no carbs     no weight gain

be careful of what you eat


the words are in my consciousness

whenever I  see pretzels, cupcakes, pizza,anchovies, or olives

no no   


restrictions

are no fun


but why carry extra fluid in the body

listen to the No's  and live

 

Marilyn  Sturner  2018     feb,

© 2018 marilyn 1225


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I love your down-to-earth declaration of how it feels when our urges do not coincide with our desire to be healthy! *wink! wink!* I haven't had pizza in many years, but I still think about it longingly! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


What's good is bad.whats bad is good.a great contradiction in life.either choose with your mind or choose with your taste buds

Posted 6 Years Ago


would you join me for a drink of bourbon?

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

Lemonade is my favorite
i guess, i am of the mind...you only live once..be somewhat careful but also enjoy the good things in life.
includes Pizza...ha ha.

i like this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

well I have been sick and have some water retention so that is what the nurse said plus way before .. read more
I like that. "Listen to the no's and live". And live a much better life that will allow you the longevity to enjoy it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

true make the sacrifices for good health but I do love black olives anyway
Kelly Scheppers

6 Years Ago

Is there a difference in taste between the black and the green olive? I don't like olives, but I'm .. read more
the mere mention of food makes me hungry, i am a sucker for olives thanks for the poem marilyn

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

thanks for this review, sette.. enjoy the olives and more
sette

6 Years Ago

yup have enjoyed eating it

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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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